OMG! He's writing the lore!

Ayyy! Let's GOOOOO! I am always a sucker fore lore building. Keep it coming!

THE LORE! Awesome, that's the stuff I love to read for the characters and the species! It's written in a way a human visiting that region would get 101 of the species living there, excellent.

I like there is a bit of history how they appeared, how there two variants of them that imply the unnatural means that created them had unpredictable result. It makes sense than less adaptive subspecies would be a minority of the population.
The descirption grasped their personalities and other traits pretty well. If they were able to wield magic, they'd be unstoppable probably. I like how other part of their anatomy was designed like cloaca and sexual behavior.
They are quite lucky regarding pregnancy because they just need to avoid fertile period if they don't want hatchlings. Are they compatible with other races due to their unnatural, ancient origin?

The design of the Queen is intriguing! The crown and jewlerly feel like it belongs to the species. I wouldn't mind seeing her nsfw art :P

Well done! I'm looking forward tor reading more lore entries ^_^

dews41 said:
THE LORE! Awesome, that's the stuff I love to read for the characters and the species!

You always write such good comments, great feedback! <3

dews41 said:
It's written in a way a human visiting that region would get 101 of the species living there, excellent.

This will become more apparent as I disclose additional world lore, but fwiw it's not a region. Midria is the world's name. While many races are pretty globally spread out, there may be less diverse pockets here and there that are home to a few people that would benefit from such lore pamphlets, in-world.

dews41 said:
The design of the Queen is intriguing! The crown and jewlerly feel like it belongs to the species. I wouldn't mind seeing her nsfw art :P

Foreshadowing ;)

terraraptor said:
You always write such good comments, great feedback! <3

This will become more apparent as I disclose additional world lore, but fwiw it's not a region. Midria is the world's name. While many races are pretty globally spread out, there may be less diverse pockets here and there that are home to a few people that would benefit from such lore pamphlets, in-world.

Foreshadowing ;)

You're much welcome! <3

Intriguing, so we can see places where ceratain species would be the majority of the population and a fellow human would be quite sight to see in that region. The travelers definitely need such a book to not cause some major faux pas there. There may be race-related tension here and there but with so many sapient species it may not be a big problem; especially in multi-race regions.

I can't wait to see it ;> It'd be quite enticing if the Queen turned out to be submissive to her human lover but she never let that show in the public just to keep her image.