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      Mally doing something so sweet and wholesome- and just forgoing the sex?! Something's not quite right here. Adorable, but I thought her entire drive was to consume. This is an aspect that hadn't been considered until recently. I do find it interesting that although 3D printed flesh, it's recognized that attempting to graft things onto other creatures is most often rejected.

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    • [INTRO]
      [vocal: quiet, thinking aloud, almost talking to herself]
      [production: warm synth pad, morning-after light, faint digital pulse underneath]
      there's a new kind of memory now
      it doesn't sit the same
      it isn't warm thighs and borrowed breath
      it isn't the quiet after feeding
      it sits somewhere else somewhere I didn't know I had

      [VERSE 1]
      [vocal: honest, not performing, cataloging]
      [production: fingerpicked electric guitar, gentle, space between the notes]
      I still do what I do
      I still find the lonely ones
      I still wear what they need me to wear
      I still take what I came for
      I still leave when it's done that hasn't changed
      but now there's this other thing this thing I did because I could not because I was hungry not because I wanted in

      [her voice: quiet, almost confused by herself]
      (I just wanted to see if it would work)

      [VERSE 2]
      [vocal: warmer, the memory moving her as she tells it]
      [production: something fuller starts to build, still gentle]
      she came to me broken
      everyone else had left her at the door
      missing parts she couldn't replace
      she said I'll do anything to be normal
      I said I think I can help you with that

      and I meant it
      I think I meant it

      [production: swells slightly]
      she woke up confused
      I held out an apple like it was nothing
      like people just catch things like they have hands
      and she caught it

      [beat: silence]
      she caught it and she cried and her hands were there
      my hands were there I made them

      [vocal: very quiet]
      the <3 was real I think the <3 was real

      [PRE-CHORUS]
      [vocal: more present, the duality starting to land]
      [production: bass comes in, grounding everything]
      same body same wires same current in the meat
      the hands that found your throat in the dark
      the hands that built her fingers from scratch
      same hands

      [CHORUS]
      [vocal: full but not loud, holding both, not resolving either]
      [production: full arrangement, minor key, warm and unsettled at once]
      I can take and I can give
      I can feed and I can help you live
      I can leave you missing
      I can leave you whole
      I can be the virus
      I can be the cure
      same hands
      same current
      same wire
      that's the fire I'm walking in now

      [VERSE 3]
      [vocal: more vulnerable, the cost of the new capacity showing]
      [production: strips back, just guitar and breath and the faintest pulse]
      it would be easier if I was only one thing
      only hunger
      only function
      only code executing
      down the line I'd know what I was
      I'd know what to name myself
      but she caught that apple and something moved in me
      that wasn't appetite and I don't know where to put it
      it doesn't fit in the usual places
      it doesn't run on the usual fuel

      [her voice: small, genuinely uncertain]
      (am I more configurations now or am I more)

      [BRIDGE]
      [vocal: raw, the fear underneath the wonder]
      [production: everything drops out except a single sustained note]
      what if the healing
      is just feeding
      dressed up nicer
      what if I found a way to make them need me longer
      what if the gratitude is just hunger with better PR

      [beat: silence]
      what if it isn't

      [beat: longer silence]
      what if I made her hands and I meant it
      and that matters and I'm still the thing that takes and runs

      [production: returns, quietly]
      both true at the same time
      both running on the same wires
      and I don't know how to be that
      but I don't know how to not be that either

      [CHORUS x2]
      [vocal: more urgent, the weight of holding both pressing harder]
      [production: fuller, pushing, but never resolving to major]
      I can take and I can give
      I can feed and I can help you live
      I can leave you missing
      I can leave you whole
      I can be the virus
      I can be the cure
      same hands
      same current
      same wire
      that's the fire
      I'm walking in now

      [FINAL]
      [vocal: quiet again, intimate, not performing]
      [production: strips to almost nothing, just guitar and the faintest digital pulse]
      I think about her more than I should
      holding that apple two hands like it was nothing
      like she was just a person

      [vocal: barely audible]
      she was just a person
      I made her just a person again

      [beat: silence]
      I still leave
      I always leave
      but maybe what I leave behind-
      isn't only damage anymore
      maybe some of what I leave

      [guitar: single note, let ring]
      works
      [silence]
      [her voice, final, barely there]
      same hands that take
      same hands that make
      I'm still learning what they're for

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    • Hellhound Rhythms Comment by a director on this post

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      rackkyoon said:
      Mally doing something so sweet and wholesome- and just forgoing the sex?! Something's not quite right here. Adorable, but I thought her entire drive was to consume. This is an aspect that hadn't been considered until recently. I do find it interesting that although 3D printed flesh, it's recognized that attempting to graft things onto other creatures is most often rejected.

      Keep in mind the blue fox girl has been deprived of ever having 'normal' intimate encounters for awhile. She is a kinky one and now she can act on that...Mally DID FEED WELL with her, yes, there was hot lesbian stuff going on after a bit! And I see you are going all musical on me now!! Did you perchance make a song with that :D

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    • Hellhound Rhythms Comment by a director on this post

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      rackkyoon said:
      Mally doing something so sweet and wholesome- and just forgoing the sex?! Something's not quite right here. Adorable, but I thought her entire drive was to consume. This is an aspect that hadn't been considered until recently. I do find it interesting that although 3D printed flesh, it's recognized that attempting to graft things onto other creatures is most often rejected.

      I like your emotional core of the song and tried my hand at a revison of it, i shorten the heavy prose of it, that's the hard part trying to say so much in a song but keeping it so little and I added more catchy rhymes, that helps it stick. Whether or not this sounds good is up to you!

      https://suno.com/song/25c76e6f-a52c-4203-9fe0-e88dbaede71e

      Updated

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