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        She staring right into your horny soul with those eyes

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            Hey, there's a picture with this erotica! A really good one too

            Edit to add: The story was a joy to read! Immediately linked to the gen in the intro, solid body with context and character development that builds up to a nice sex scene (that I wish we could see), then concludes with the generation again. Perfectly accomplished what it needed to do, no notes! Did you write it yourself?

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          • zheneric said:
            Hey, there's a picture with this erotica! A really good one too

            Edit to add: The story was a joy to read! Immediately linked to the gen in the intro, solid body with context and character development that builds up to a nice sex scene (that I wish we could see), then concludes with the generation again. Perfectly accomplished what it needed to do, no notes! Did you write it yourself?

            Yes I did. I wasn't sure how it would turn out because I really don't do any creative writing as a hobby. I felt as though I reused much of the same vocabulary which is my own criticism about the story.

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          • that1bananaguy said:
            Yes I did. I wasn't sure how it would turn out because I really don't do any creative writing as a hobby. I felt as though I reused much of the same vocabulary which is my own criticism about the story.

            Even more impressive that you just busted that out without experience. A more diverse vocabulary will come as you write more (which I hope you do). Most importantly, enjoy the process!

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