Just took the time to read your story in it's entirety (while it could use some proof reading for grammatical errors galore, lol), and I absolutely loved it. Good work!

redactedpaws said:
Just took the time to read your story in it's entirety (while it could use some proof reading for grammatical errors galore, lol), and I absolutely loved it. Good work!

Thank you!

To be honest i really need to go back and fix it for sure.

I was in a kind of tough situation at the time that I was making my AI stuff, and had a tendency for my muse on what i was doing and writing at the time to be, umm, alcohol fueled and written, so yeah, a rewrite is in order.